DBZ Fanfic- Demo Pg

Settle in folks this is going to be long winded...

A scene of great importance for my DBZ Fanfic...
The World Martial Arts Tournament, or Budokai Tenkaichi (I think thats right.), has seen its fair share of strange competitions, but none more explosive than this. Yola Brief, daughter of Trunks and Pan, Grandaughter of the Sayian Prince Vegeta, and Great Grandaughter to the infamous warrior Goku, has reached a pinacle of strength never seen before by a women.
After a rigorous battle with the artificial Saiyan Bartin, her power exploded in a golden ploom of Super Saiyan Energy. All have frozen in this moment and though the stadium holds 400 people there are 7 for whom this transformation effects.
Going from left to right...

Top Left: Yola's cousin, Brussel, whose attempt to prove himself as a fighter in the tournament is thwarted in the first round by Bartin. Despite his positive attitude and friendship with his cousin this transformation is a severe blow to him.
- She will inherit the Capsule Forture...
-She has become a powerful fighter...
-She, against all odds has reached a coveted transformation he has yet to attain.

Middle left: The proud parents, Trunks and Pan, frozen in frear. They had just watched Yola get pummeled mercilessly by the Red Ribbon Saiyan and now their only child burns with a fiery rage in her eyes. (Yeah they don't look like they aged much.)

Bottom Left: Master Uub, at one point he was Goku's apprentice, now he retains the title of Worlds strongest fighter and Yola's mentor. His training has helped her tap into this latent power thought denied to women and he smiles upon his student's accomplishment.

Bottom Right: Bartin's Master/Caretaker/Friend by far my favorite android from the series, 16 returns in the form of a new model, he has no memory of the Cell Games or his predecessor's demise, yet he himself remains the same in demeanor. When Bartin was "born" 16 (.0) was activated to serve as bodyguard, training partner, and friend to the young saiyan. Though pure in heart and comitted to his mission he lacks the personality to cultivate Bartin's humanity.

Middle Right: Bartin, the Red Ribbon Saiyan. Created from stem cells taken from battle grounds of Earth, Bartin is a full blooded saiyan. Since he was a child he was trained intensly to the point of death, his only friend the Android sworn to protect him. Living underground until he was 14, he is cold in demeanor and ruthless in battle. Still others find hope in him. In this pic he is frozen with fear at Yola's transformation. Convinced that her Saiyan blood content was too diluted to perform this feet he contests that his pure blood will help him grow beyond the level of a Super Saiyan...still he must reach that level.

Told you it was long...
this is crude and done quickly and I will no doubt move it into scraps after a few days, but I wanted to show you all what I had in mind for the series, that I am constently yakking about...

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